Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
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are educational places filled with a range of artifacts
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ancient
history of ancestors. People expand horizons and gain knowledge by visiting Add an article
the ancient
such
places. Nevertheless
, these days, it is obligatory to pay an entrance fee to enter some museums
. Even though compulsory payment may have some disadvantages, I believe that benefits
of that phenomenon outweigh them.
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the benefits
First
of all, it is obvious that the cost of tickets can be a problem for low-income people. They cannot afford to pay for admission
, and as a
result
they lose the opportunity for access to useful information and knowledge. Add a comma
,result
Secondly
, as we know, most of humanity craves to
free stuff. Fix the infinitive
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That is
why charge for admission
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museums
, thus
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reducing
desire
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the desire
Moreover
, it also
leads to decrease
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a decrease
the
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in the
museums
' popularity among
society.
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a
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Firstly
, income will help to maintain museum items in proper condition. To be precise, all the ancient relics and valuable artifacts
require careful handling and restoration as they deteriorate. Change the spelling
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Secondly
, money is needed for museum business needs. For instance
, electricity bills, room rent, expensive equipment, employers' salaries and many others. In addition
, money is the main basis for good visuals and quality museum content. Even from my past experiences, museums
with mandatory pay admission
were much better in terms of equipment, facilities, staff, and relics. Moreover
, they had even canteen
.
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a canteen
museums
make people spiritually wealthier and more intelligent. Because of that, although
charge
for Add an article
the charge
admission
causes some disadvantages, payment is really required for successful
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