The knowledge we gain from our personal experiences is more valuable than the knowledge we gain from books. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Recent research
suggest
(s) that personal Change the verb form
suggests
experiences
(autobiography, Use synonyms
life
story, journal) (are) more important than from(from yok) learning what is written in(on) the Use synonyms
books
(bills, Use synonyms
reports
). personal Use synonyms
experiences
(autobiography, Use synonyms
life
story, journal) inflict (s) pain(acı vermek) to us and (,)Use synonyms
generally
the pains are bigging us. but according to some (,)people Add a comma
,generally
books
(Use synonyms
reports
) say(ing) that what we will live in the future. I partly agree with Use synonyms
this
statement we are learned some by(from) personal Linking Words
experiences
(Use synonyms
life
) stories Use synonyms
although
writing(written) in the Linking Words
books
(bills, Use synonyms
reports
).
Use synonyms
Firstly
, when i(I) finished my(my yok) school, i(I) tried to learn Linking Words
crypto currency
(cryptocurrency) and Correct your spelling
cryptocurrency
then
i(I) invested most of my Linking Words
money
(cash, found, pay). even though(buna rağmen) it always seems like I'm making a lot of Use synonyms
money
but actually Use synonyms
i
was lucky to(in) my trades. in the past, all Change the capitalization
I
books
(Use synonyms
reports
) which Use synonyms
i
read always it(it yok) said to me you(I) must use a Change the capitalization
I
stoploss
(stop loss) but when Correct your spelling
stop loss
i
used (a) Change the capitalization
I
stoploss
(stop loss), the stock market always stopped me and Correct your spelling
stop loss
stop-loss
then
it was increasing fastly because there was not easy Linking Words
money
. One day, my(a) big part of (my) Use synonyms
money
suddenly lose out because i(I) didn't use (a) Use synonyms
stoploss
(stop loss). What I didn't learn from Correct your spelling
stop loss
stop-loss
books
, I learned from my mistakes.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, writers generally write about their Linking Words
experiences
(Use synonyms
life
stories) in the Use synonyms
books
. Use synonyms
for instance
, one of the reasons talked up by some (is) do many Linking Words
travelers
(travellers) know, or do many readers know?' everybody Change the spelling
travellers
have
(has) (an) in opinion for Correct subject-verb agreement
has
this
subject. in my opinion, If it weren’t(was not) for those who travel a lot, those Linking Words
books
wouldn’t(would not) have been made.
To(in) conclusion, people who can involve(dahil etmek) art write their Use synonyms
experiences
as the book(s). They don't want others to make mistakes they have made in the past.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite