You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter give details of your course explain why you need a week off say what you want the Principal to do.

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Dear Sir, My names are Luis Brendon and I am an international

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year-student at Briston University, majoring in Mechanical Engineering. I am writing to inform I may need a week off to resolve a few problems concerning my college enrollment. I have been taking the program for 1 year now, and I may send some documents proving my current financial situation.

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semester my course has been part-time owing to my working hours in the afternoon. As you know, the Engineering campus is situated in North area of the Campus and the Financial Department I need to turn to is almost a 6-day trip, so I thereby have some traffic problems,

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my classes I should attend.

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, I would appreciate it if I could have a 7-day period from the campus to deliver my documents to be revised.

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, I would like to get an academic certification from the university to

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show there. I will be looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Luis Brendon,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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6 paragraphs

170 words

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Some people think that universities should not provide so much theoretical knowledge but give more practical training throughout their courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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many university students choose the Internet as their main source of educational research . what is the advantages and disadvantages of the issue?

More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries. Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.