a magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called the book that influenced me the most" write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you today in
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included in your latest publishing. Hence
, I want to share my experience with one reference that has influenced me greatly.
Firstly
, let me give you some idea about that book. In fact, it is a remarkable scientific book, which inludes
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, it made me understand a tremendous amount of information about the world, and how many things work. In addition
, it inspired me to become interested in science and technology,
and try to unlock the secrets of the universe.
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Lastly
, I am convinced that such
a material could serve as an outstanding source of information, especially for juveniles, if it was recommended properly. Actually, it can not only be educational but also
thrilling and pleasing at the same time.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Faithfully,
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite