It is commonly believed that nowadays main factors that affect a child's development are media, pop culture and friends. A different point of view is that family plays the most significant role.

It is generally argued, by some, that different types of social

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and friend

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affect the

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upbringing. While others believe that parents’ role profoundly influences offspring's

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.

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essay will discuss both points of view but, in my opinion, the latter has a more dramatic impact. On the one hand,

children’s

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mental and physical development is mainly affected by their surroundings. Many believe social

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and peer

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can shape the

personality

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of kids.

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,

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platforms like television and pop affect them. When they start watching it, not only see the fashion trend but

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adopt the same in their lives.

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, when little ones go out of their houses, they meet different people with various cultures and behaviours. So, their

personality

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will be impressed.

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, my niece desires to have

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the same as princesses in animations.

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, parents have a significant role in the growth of

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personalities.

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, when kids are born, they see their parents from the very

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second

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.

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, they are just in touch with them and will copy their behaviour.

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, if mother and father have always argued together,

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children will learn and exhibit in facing others. So, in my perspective, parents have a profound influence on the character of children in comparison to social

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and peer

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. To sum up, the

children’s

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surroundings have a considerable impact on their

personality

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.

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, I believe that the

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role

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in comparison with social

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and friend

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.