The government is spending alot of money to discover life on other planets. Some people think that the government is wasting money and should spend more money addressing the problems of public. What extent do you agree

It is considered that the

government

expended

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amount

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of

funds

to create awareness about activities on

other

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universe whereas some certain individuals viewed

this

as a waste of

funds

which should be spent on other public challenges. I strongly support the

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later

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notion.

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essay tends to

discussion

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other public challenges that should be attended to by the

government

and

reasons

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why they should be combated.

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with, there are

plethora

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of public issues that should be viewed by the

government

.

Firstly

, lack of adequate public amenities. It is well known that in

Nigeria

, there

are

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insufficient

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provision of public amenities( good road, adequate water supply, stable electricity supply)by the

government

.

Instead

of lavishing money on knowledge about the planet, the

government

should rather disburse the cash on providing enough facilities where they are

duely

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duly

needed e.g developing and

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underdeveloped

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under developed

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underdeveloped

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countries.

For instance

, in

Nigeria

, Kwara state is an

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underdeveloped

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under developed

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underdeveloped

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country which lacks

good

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road network, adequate water supply and constant electricity supply.

Therefore

, public

funds

can be spent on these challenges in order to ease the

populace

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pain in that geographical region.

Secondly

,

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salary rate is another challenge affecting the community.

This

has been a fundamental issue in

Nigeria

which needed to be addressed.

Government

should expend public

funds

on salaries and wages in order to increase the standard of living of the residents.

Nevertheless

, there are numerous reasons why these problems should be addressed.

First

of all, it enhances

citizens

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standard of living. When these issues are combated, it relieved the populace of their stress and reduced their cost of living.

For example

, in

Nigeria

,

kwara

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state residents protested about their lack of amenities. After a while, they were provided with

good

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road network , adequate water supply and stable electricity supply which makes life easier for them and even made the geographical area more civilized.

Secondly

, it enhances

improvement

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of the affected community. Once those things needed are put into place,

these

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will help in the development of

the

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society. In conclusion, it is evident that lavishing money on the awareness of other universe is not really necessary.

However

, there are more public issues that should be addressed and mitigated. The responsibility is on the

government

to navigate

on

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the public needs and how the needs can be met. 🙏🙏🙈