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Lots of people are throwing away food. What are the reasons for this and how can food wastage be reduced?

#lots #people #food #wastage
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These days,
food
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 waste has a global problem and a lot of
people
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 have not concerned about wasting
food
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,despite knowing that of
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 the
food
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 is consume more resources.
people
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 tend to throw the
food
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instead
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 of preserving them.
This
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 essay will discuss the problem of throwing
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 and
also
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 propose some solutions. one of the main reasons of wastes
food
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 is that
people
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 buy excess goods than their use.
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.sometimes
people
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 buy a bunch of
food
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 for themselves and they know that we cannot eat all
food
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.
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,the remaining meal possible goes to the trash.If
people
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 buy the limited
food
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 for themselves it will help to prevent
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 wastage.
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, Nowadays in every part of the world folks consume
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restaurant
foods
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.Restaurants gave
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 to the
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 more than they acquired.for ,example the Restaurant serves a meal on a big plate while
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 meal on a plate is suitable for two or three
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 but in , a hotel
this
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 meal is for one person.
as a result
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.it is obvious that the remaining
food
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 will be thrown away.To tackle
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 issue,Restaurants need to manage the serving
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 and make an effort to limit the
food
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.
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,a lot of
people
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 do not have a proper storage system.
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,
People
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 get rid of bananas and milk because it is harmful to
people
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 to take without proper conservation.To solve
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 issue,
people
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 should have possessed a good
food
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 keeping refrigerator so they can preserve the
food
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 for a long time. To sum up,
food
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 waste is a growing problem in
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 modern generation.,
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 To Tackle
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 issue , restaurants,
People
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 and good Preservation Technology can help a lot to stop wasting
food
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.
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