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Lots of people are throwing away food. What are the reasons for this and how can food wastage be reduced?

#lots #people #food #wastage
These days,
food
 waste has a global problem and a lot of
people
 have not concerned about wasting
food
,despite knowing that of
disposing
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 the
food
 is consume more resources.
people
 tend to throw the
food
instead
 of preserving them.
This
 essay will discuss the problem of throwing
food
 and
also
 propose some solutions. one of the main reasons of wastes
food
 is that
people
 buy excess goods than their use.
For example
.sometimes
people
 buy a bunch of
food
 for themselves and they know that we cannot eat all
food
.
as a result
,the remaining meal possible goes to the trash.If
people
 buy the limited
food
 for themselves it will help to prevent
food
 wastage.
Secondly
, Nowadays in every part of the world folks consume
the
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restaurant
foods
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.Restaurants gave
food
 to the
people
 more than they acquired.for ,example the Restaurant serves a meal on a big plate while
this
 meal on a plate is suitable for two or three
people
 but in , a hotel
this
 meal is for one person.
as a result
.it is obvious that the remaining
food
 will be thrown away.To tackle
this
 issue,Restaurants need to manage the serving
food
 and make an effort to limit the
food
.
Finally
,a lot of
people
 do not have a proper storage system.
For instance
,
People
 get rid of bananas and milk because it is harmful to
people
 to take without proper conservation.To solve
this
 issue,
people
 should have possessed a good
food
 keeping refrigerator so they can preserve the
food
 for a long time. To sum up,
food
 waste is a growing problem in
this
 modern generation.,
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However
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,However
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 To Tackle
this
 issue , restaurants,
People
 and good Preservation Technology can help a lot to stop wasting
food
.
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