Task1: The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.
The given diagrams illustrate the life cycle of salmons, a large species of fish.
Overall
, it is noticeable there are a total of three stages in this
life cycle, commencing with the egg stage
and ending with the adult stage
.
In the first stage
, the salmon's life cycle begins with the hatching of eggs. These salmon eggs are laid amongst the reeds and small stones in the upper river
. It is notable that this
part of the river
is slow-moving. In this
stage
, after a period of about five to six months, the baby fish that are born are called fry and are about three to eight long. The fry swims from the lower river
to fast flowing.
In the second
stage
, after Living in this
lower river
for a period of about four years, the fry gradually grows into a smolt when it measures about 12 to 15 cm in length. Following
this
stage
, it is ready to migrate into the open sea which the
smolt for roughly about 5 years. Add a missing verb
is the
After
this
stage
has been completed, the adult stage
is approximately 70 to 76 cm long. Finally
, the adult fish swim back to the same location where they were born.Submitted by bphonporton on
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