Some people think that it is good for a country's culture to import foreign movies and TV programmes. Others think that it is better to produce these locally. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Many
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now prefer imported foreign
films
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and TV programmes while others feel that movies produced locally are much better for a nation’s culture.
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essay discusses both sides of
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argument, and
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I will give my own perspective. The foremost reason why many television audiences strongly support external
films
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and TV telecasts is due to
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contribution that they give to the cultural diversity of a country .
Firstly
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, when a country imports
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of
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other nations, it can help the residents to learn about foreign cultures and customs in an easier and more effective way.
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, it is common to catch
people
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each other on
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even
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are strangers and have just met for the
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time so that domestic occupants are able to be more open-minded.
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,
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can learn the policy to innovate and invest
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the infrastructure.
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, the standard quality
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lives
life
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lifes
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lives
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of
people
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are improved.
On the other hand
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, some
people
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would rather see domestic shows and movies because it helps to cultivate the traditional culture. Specifically, many directors tend to produce shows that reminisce memory
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old celebrations in the former days.
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, the previous generations always want to keep the traditional norms as well as practices.
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, film audiences in Vietnam are fond of elegant scenes
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of sensitive situations in America.
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, these local products are genuinely beneficial for a nation’s culture. In conclusion, I believe both arguments have their merits.
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, I am
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in favour
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of imported
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because I can gain more
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knowledge
and
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diversify
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my own lifestyle to perfect myself.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural exchange
  • enriches
  • diverse perspectives
  • storytelling methods
  • spur creativity
  • innovation
  • genres
  • styles
  • over-reliance
  • undermine
  • overshadow
  • cultural homogenization
  • national identity
  • local talent
  • linguistic relevance
  • relatable
  • accessible
  • domestic audience
  • preserve
  • cultural identity
  • promote
  • balanced approach
  • cultural landscape
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