Some businesses now say that no-one can smoke cigarettes in any of their offices some governments have banned smoking in all public places. Do you agree or disagree with this?

Sending all
criminals
to
prison
would be a terrible idea. Why
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prison
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place for everyone. All
criminals
have done against the law, but there are different degrees of disobedience to the law people in
prison
usually are the worst
criminals
. In
this
place, people who are professional offenders
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get the wrong education. What kind of
criminals
shouldn’t get
prison
? Doing against traffic rules shouldn’t go to
prison
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fine. What would happen if all
criminals
went to
prison
? I believe that the person who commits murder must be prisoned and punished
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public health
  • second-hand smoke
  • respiratory diseases
  • healthcare costs
  • productivity
  • fire hazards
  • environmental advantages
  • aesthetics
  • non-smokers
  • personal freedom
  • well-being
  • smoking bans
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