The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart indicates the variety in
having
three types of electronic devices - washing Unnecessary verb
apply
machines
, refrigerators, and vacuum
cleaners, in addition
to the proportion of families in a country spending time doing chores
from 1920 to 2019.
Generally speaking, in 1920, the number of quantities of washing machines
was the largest among them all, and there was almost no one owned a refrigerator
. In contrast
, when it came to 2019, most people
have a refrigerator
or a vacuum
cleaner, whereas
some people
don’t have a washing machine. And during this
period of time, people
had
declined Unnecessary verb
apply
their
time spent doing their Change the word
the
chores
.
Also
, in 1920, 40% of people
had a washing machine, and 30% of them had a vacuum
cleaner, yet almost none of them had a refrigerator
. Nevertheless
, after two decades, the number of people
owning a refrigerator
had risen to roughly 52%, while
those owning washing machines
and vacuum
cleaners had both risen by merely 20%. In 2000, those having refrigerators and vacuum
cleaners have risen to 100%, yet those having washing machines
remained constant at 70% for decades.
There were 50% of families doing
their Wrong verb form
did
chores
every week back in 1920, but the number of people
doing it has declined throughout the years, and merely 10% of them were doing their chores
each week in the year 2019.Submitted by rruby6120tw on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words machines, vacuum, chores, refrigerator, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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