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In many cities more and more people are choosing to live on their own. What are the reasons behind this? Is it a positive or negative trend?

Today, as we can see many
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 tend to live alone in some cities,
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 issue. On the one hand, some
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 like to live alone
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 is related to the progress of technology
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 lead to the
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 have very less need to each other and they prefer to be alone,
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,
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 matter leads to do not have any self-confidence for communication with each other if they do not want to change their life these reasons can become to a serious problem
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 as they can suffering to an illness like mental diseases,
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, their isolation can lead to long-distance from another
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 that
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, many the
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 think that when they are alone they are very calm and they said that
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 topic become to habit for them and they do not have any need for other person and they solve every their problem too easily, because of the human is a social creature and always need to get help from another
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, they want to deny
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 reason that they want to prove to other
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 they are independent and do not need to another
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, when we have communication with other
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 can help us to be successful, and maybe hard to access in another city and the
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 have to be alone. In conclusion,
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 is a negative aspect for
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 who prefer to be alone and always the human need to interact with other
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 and communication can improve their self-confidence that leads to a better life and we always depend on interaction,
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, we suffering to a different type of illnesses .

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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