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Nowadays the ways people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays,
technology
 has been developing very fast and it is becoming an integral part of
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human life.
Technology
 has been used in all different branches
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 many purposes. One of the common roles of
technology
 is communication between
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people
. I believe that
this
 is a positive development in
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most
of
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cases.
To begin
 with,
people
 can interact with each other easily helped by
technology
.
This
 is
very
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 effective method for
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people
 to keep their time and save their money at
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 time, especially during
this
 busiest life. Recently years,
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 of
people
 who used
smartphone
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 is increasing
around
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the
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worldwide.
This
 is becoming one of the biggest reasons for boosting
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 of users of
technology
 in order to interact and communicate with each other.
In addition
,
technology
 can provide the chance and opportunities to the
people
 to see and meet their parents, children and friends through internet from the anywhere they want.
However
, I believe that
technology
 has some negative sides as it encourages isolation between
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people
.
This
 is because
people
 can stay in
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 of their homes for as long as they want, pretending to be doing great without anyone noticing.
First
, according to
the
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some research, physical interaction
such
 as
hug
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 and
shake
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hand
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 between
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people
 can prevent any depression.
Therefore
, there is no
any
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physical interaction when communicating and interacting with each other via
internet
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,
technology
 can
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isolation
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, some kind of stress and depression.
Moreover
, interacting with someone over
technology
 is
high
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risky
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 to become a victim of some kind of
crimes
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such
 as
,
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 kidnapping and violence. In conclusion,
people
 should keep
the
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 balance between
usage
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 of
technology
 in order to receive more positive
outcome
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outcomes
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 than
negative
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.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • technology
  • interact
  • relationships
  • connectivity
  • communication
  • online
  • face-to-face
  • friendships
  • romantic relationships
  • family dynamics
  • positive
  • negative
  • development
  • effects
  • formation
  • ease
  • impacts
  • communities
  • connect
  • interaction
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