Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In the 21st century, most of the world's population prefers to travel abroad for pleasure. One part of the

people

believes

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believe

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that

this

incorrectly affects the

countries

in which these

people

have vacationed, while others do not agree with

this

statement.I completely disagree with

this

statement, as tourism promotes the economy and culture of the

host

countries

. On the one hand, travellers can harm the

countries

they have visited.

Firstly

, among ordinary

tourists

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,tourists

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there may be criminals who may defy the established rules in

countries

.

Secondly

, it is the harm that the ecology of the

host

state receives.

For example

, according to volunteer companies, the amount of garbage left by visitors from other

countries

is growing,

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infamous

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tourist places of Kazakhstan.

On the other hand

, visiting foreign

countries

has a list of advantages for both the

host

nation and sightseers. Tourism improves the country's economy, promotes tourism companies,

the

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and the

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country's attractions around the world and

also

increases the employment of the population.

Moreover

,

this

is a good opportunity to find a new social environment and friends for everyone. While travelling, a person can meet

people

who are

also

visiting the assigned state or meet

people

from the

host

country, which will broaden

people

's minds and help in future promotion. In conclusion, the pros outweigh the cons and visiting other

countries

for pleasure will improve many aspects of these states and the identity of tourists should be checked so that they do not harm

countries

.