The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart indicates the variations in having three types of electronic devices - washing engines, refrigerators, and vacuum cleaners,
in addition
to the proportion of families in a country spending time doing chores from 1920 to 2019.
Generally speaking, in 1920, the number of Linking Words
people
having washing appliances was the largest among them all, and there was almost no one owned a cooler. Use synonyms
In contrast
, when it came to 2019, most households have a refrigerator or a hoover, Linking Words
whereas
some of them don’t have a washing machine. And during Linking Words
this
period of time, Linking Words
people
Use synonyms
had
declined Unnecessary verb
apply
their
time spent doing their chores.
To be more specific, in 1920, 40% of Change the word
the
people
had a washing machine, and 30% of them had a hoover , yet almost none of them(0.5%) had a refrigerator. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, after two decades, the number of the population owning a cooler had risen to roughly 52%, Linking Words
while
those owning washing appliances and hoovers had both risen by merely 20%. In 2000, those having refrigerators and vacuum cleaners have risen to 100%, yet those having washing engines remained constant at 70% for decades.
Linking Words
In addition
to that, there were 50% of families did their chores every week back in 1920, but the number of Linking Words
people
doing it has declined throughout the years, and merely 10% of them were doing so in the year 2019.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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