Task1; The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The given pie charts illustrate the proportion of six different purposes, including, North
America
, South America
, Europe
, Africa
, Central Asia
, and South East Asia
, all of which are used water
.
Overall
, most of
Change preposition
apply
the
areas in the world Correct article usage
apply
use
water
mainly for agriculture. Moreover
, Africa
and Central Asia
use
a similar amount of water
.
Agricultural use
of water
contributes significantly to total water
consumption
across the six regions mentioned. Furthermore
, industrial use
makes up for the majority of water
consumption
in North America
and Europe
at 48% and 53% respectively. Moreover
, using domestic water
is about 15% in North America
, South America
, and Europe
. However
, the agricultural consumption
of water
in South America
is higher than in North America
and Europe
at 32% and 39% respectively.
In Africa
, Central Asia
, and South East Asia
, agricultural use
contributes more than 80% of the water
use
. Interestingly, domestic use
of water
has the same percentage at 7% in Central Asia
and South East Asia
. In addition
, industrial consumption
of water
in Africa
, Central Asia
, and South East Asia
at
7%, 5%,and 12% respectively.Add a missing verb
is at
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