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Task1; The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Task1; The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
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The given pie charts illustrate the proportion of six different purposes, including, North
America
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, South
America
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,
Europe
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,
Africa
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, Central
Asia
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, and South East
Asia
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, all of which are used
water
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.
Overall
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, most
of
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apply
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the
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apply
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areas in the world
use
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water
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 mainly for agriculture.
Moreover
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,
Africa
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 and Central
Asia
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use
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 a similar amount of
water
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. Agricultural
use
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 of
water
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 contributes significantly to total
water
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consumption
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 across the six regions mentioned.
Furthermore
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, industrial
use
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 makes up for the majority of
water
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consumption
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 in North
America
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 and
Europe
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 at 48% and 53% respectively.
Moreover
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, using domestic
water
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 is about 15% in North
America
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, South
America
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 , and
Europe
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.
However
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, the agricultural
consumption
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 of
water
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 in South
America
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 is higher than in North
America
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 and
Europe
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 at 32% and 39% respectively. In
Africa
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, Central
Asia
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, and South East
Asia
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, agricultural
use
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 contributes more than 80% of the
water
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use
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. Interestingly, domestic
use
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 of
water
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 has the same percentage at 7% in Central
Asia
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 and South East
Asia
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.
In addition
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, industrial
consumption
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 of
water
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 in
Africa
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, Central
Asia
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, and South East
Asia
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at
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is at
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 7%, 5%,and 12% respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words america, europe, africa, asia, water, use, consumption with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • irrigation
  • domestic
  • industrial
  • regional disparity
  • economic structure
  • sustainable management
  • water-scarce
  • population density
  • urbanization
  • data trends
  • resource allocation
  • percentage distribution
  • extremes
  • variations
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