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Government should make more efforts to promote alternative sources of energy. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Ministry should make more try to introduce other
sources
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. source of
power
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. I strongly agree with
this
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 point. My inclination is explained
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, in the contemporary ,years there are multiple industries are running using
energy
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sources
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.
Energy
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sources
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 like coal, petrol, diesel and many more
sources
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 are nearby to lost. So management should encourage industrialists for using solar
energy
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 for running their machines as well as the basic
sources
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 which needed
power
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.
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, authorities should have to declare some subsidies to encourage them.
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, recently all the transports are running with using fuel and CNG. But, both the
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 have limited stocks for management.
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, the administration should start some campaigns to avoid using that type of vehicle rather than that
people
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 should apply to use electric vehicles.
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, central should hire the various types of NGOs in which they are doing some activities to encourage
people
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 for using less amount of personal bikes. It can help to control pollution as well as little kind of help to save
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 carrier.
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, the regime should start to run some plants to generate
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 from the marine. From marine
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 runs many industrial plants as well as residential electric supply.
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, the government should support farmers to produce
power
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 from biogas which they are using as gas for running their agricultural plants, as well as selling their
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 to the central and get money for that. To sum up, the ministry should allocate some subsidies to encourage the
people
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 who are able to support generating alternative
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sources
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of
power
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. As well as, they should purchase some units from them and distribute them in the electric
power
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 sector. Based on
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people
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 are supporting alternative
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 of
energy
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.
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