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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had huge negative impacts on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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A group of individuals incline to think that social
media
 applications have repercussions on mankind and the community. I partially agree with
this
 notion. My position is justified
further
 with reasons and examples. On the one hand, it is often believed by many people that
media
 platforms have had negative effects on people and the community. The foremost reason is it is addictive in nature. To elaborate on
this
, it has been observed that nowadays increasing numbers of individuals are using
Facebook
 and Instagram apps for entertainment. They are not able to focus on their edification; spend hours surfing the stories on their
Facebook
 accounts.
As a result
, children are becoming lazy and inactive which will have detrimental effects on their physical well-being. For an instance, in recent days according to the survey conducted by WHO (world health
organization)
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the youngsters are spending much time on social
media
 sources which is the fundamental reason behind their physical illnesses.
On the other hand
, some others argue that it has
also
 some positive impacts on society as a whole.
This
 is because it helps in the development of businesses in society.
This
 means
,
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 it plays a fundamental role in e-commerce growth. With the help of various social ,
media
 platforms companies can promote the newly launched products across the world.
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Facebook
 and ,Instagram there
is
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 paid promotions options are available. The best epitome Shopify website which is a well-known online shopping site that gowns by using
paid
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 promotion of various products through
Facebook
. In conclusion, notwithstanding the advantages
such
 as interaction with others and development in businesses, the loss of physical well-being and addictive nature will bring students to waste their precious time.
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