It is natural process of animal species to become extinct, so there is no reason why people should stop this from happening. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is an actual fact that many people think the extinction of

animals

is a part of creatures and humans have no reason to prevent that thing. I completely disagree with

this

idea, and

this

essay will argue why people need to protect

animals

from becoming extinct.

Firstly

, the disappearance of

animals

is not the natural law, most of the extinction of

animals

is caused by hunting and indirect human actions.

For example

; these days the number of tigers in Vietnam is significantly reduced and hunting is the cause of

this

problem. The goods from tigers are really expensive so

that is

the reason for the hunter who broke the Vietnam law to kill them and make illegal money easy.

Secondly

, many

animals

affect

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our life and environment;

therefore

, we have the responsibility to protect the endangered

animals

.

For example

, the action eats the insect of birds

help

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helps

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the tree have more fruit.

As a result

,

this

thing can help farmers protect their trees and make more money from

this

and

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also

The

natural

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nature

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is a food chain and maybe some

animals

do not directly influence our life but we need to protect all the

animals

to keep the other

animal safe

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. In conclusion, it is undeniable that human life has been maintained by a natural world so the preservation of endangered species should be more

concerned

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. It is predicted that the extinction will come back to be a natural event and not be in relation to human activities.