Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skill. Do you agree or disagree?

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Education is a mandatory thing that people must have to train a framework of thinking. There is an opinion that every education level from primary schools until universities is busier giving facts to
students
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rather than practising practical
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. To my view, regarding the
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in my country, the opinion is very relevant. I will explain two points of view which are the tight
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and
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’ preferences to attest to my argument.
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of all, most of the
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is giving a lot of classes in a very short
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.
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,
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usually have to attend four classes every day. The fact is that
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are studying those classes by reading and listening to the theories and don’t have enough
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to explore practical
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.
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will prefer memorizing to practising their studies.
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, it is good for
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to develop their memorization
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and learn the basics theories, while it is not enough for dealing with work situations.
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, most
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will hire employees who have more practical
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than someone who understands more factual theories.
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, technology
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are always innovating their products and have very fast paces to develop their products,
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they need programmers who are agile and flexible to code and ready to fix bugs in systems in a short
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. According to the situation, young programmers who are just graduated will struggle to face complex coding that they have never faced in university life.
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triggers
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to choose employee candidates who have working experience than academic achievements. In conclusion, the
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that
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get from schools or universities are not enough for
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to hire them regarding their practical
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. It is supporting the public opinion above. It is the
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for educational institutions to rearrange their
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to build
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whose at least basic practical
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to face a working world.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • education system
  • curriculum
  • factual knowledge
  • practical skills
  • critical thinking
  • problem solving
  • academic achievement
  • real-world application
  • balance
  • integration
  • learning outcomes
  • employment opportunities
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