Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skill. Do you agree or disagree?

Education is a mandatory thing that people must have to train a framework of thinking. There is an opinion that every education level from primary schools until universities is busier giving facts to
students
rather than practising practical
skills
. To my view, regarding the
curriculum
in my country, the opinion is very relevant. I will explain two points of view which are the tight
curriculum
and
companies
’ preferences to attest to my argument.
First
of all, most of the
curriculum
is giving a lot of classes in a very short
time
.
For instance
,
students
usually have to attend four classes every day. The fact is that
students
are studying those classes by reading and listening to the theories and don’t have enough
time
to explore practical
skills
.
Students
will prefer memorizing to practising their studies.
However
, it is good for
students
to develop their memorization
skills
and learn the basics theories, while it is not enough for dealing with work situations.
Secondly
, most
companies
will hire employees who have more practical
skills
than someone who understands more factual theories.
For example
, technology
companies
are always innovating their products and have very fast paces to develop their products,
thus
they need programmers who are agile and flexible to code and ready to fix bugs in systems in a short
time
. According to the situation, young programmers who are just graduated will struggle to face complex coding that they have never faced in university life.
This
triggers
companies
to choose employee candidates who have working experience than academic achievements. In conclusion, the
skills
that
students
get from schools or universities are not enough for
companies
to hire them regarding their practical
skills
. It is supporting the public opinion above. It is the
time
for educational institutions to rearrange their
curriculum
to build
students
whose at least basic practical
skills
to face a working world.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • education system
  • curriculum
  • factual knowledge
  • practical skills
  • critical thinking
  • problem solving
  • academic achievement
  • real-world application
  • balance
  • integration
  • learning outcomes
  • employment opportunities
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