Some people think that teenagers should follow the example of older people. Others think that it is natural for teenagers to challenge what older people say. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is widely accepted that younger
generations
should learn from
people
that are more mature, both in age and mentality.
However
, others may disagree and argue that
teenagers
should build their characters by challenging the older
generations
. I would
agree
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both views, to some extent.
Teenagers
, in general, are
group
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a group
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of
people
who have not yet dealt with the cruelty of life. The most troublesome issues for
this
age group are
argubly
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arguably
largely
the problems of acne, changing voices and other puberty-related concerns.
Therefore
, they may not have the knowledge and experience to meet the responsibilities as they gradually transform into adulthood. Indeed, following examples led by older
generations
might help them to overcome hardships and manage expectations of the future.
However
, some may argue that since we are living in a world
that is
filled with rapid changes, we need to have brand new ways to think and cooperate. In an environment
that is
dynamic and constantly evolving, past experience is
thus
less reliable in teaching younger
people
about the truths of life.
Therefore
,
teenagers
would benefit more if they learn to
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challenge
the older ways of thinking and
then
create their own understanding of the world. Because it is more likely that the old solutions become restrictions rather than
liberation
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the liberation
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of thoughts. After all, society improves as old rules
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, and outdated dogmas get challenged by younger
generations
. In conclusion. I would agree
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both views.
Firstly
,
teenagers
can learn a great deal from examples led by
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older
people
.
Secondly
, younger
people
should be encouraged to challenge the old customs and rules.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Role models
  • Respect for tradition
  • Wisdom
  • Societal stability
  • Continuity
  • Critical thinking
  • Innovation
  • Societal progress
  • Adaptability
  • Questioning authority
  • Seeking identity
  • Generational gap
  • Value systems
  • Adherence
  • Challenging norms
  • Cultural evolution
  • Empathy
  • Guidance
  • Rebellion
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