Some people think that teenagers should follow the example of older people. Others think that it is natural for teenagers to challenge what older people say. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is widely accepted that younger
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should learn from
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that are more mature, both in age and mentality.
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, others may disagree and argue that
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should build their characters by challenging the older
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. I would
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both views, to some extent.
Teenagers
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, in general, are
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a group
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of
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who have not yet dealt with the cruelty of life. The most troublesome issues for
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age group are
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the problems of acne, changing voices and other puberty-related concerns.
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, they may not have the knowledge and experience to meet the responsibilities as they gradually transform into adulthood. Indeed, following examples led by older
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might help them to overcome hardships and manage expectations of the future.
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, some may argue that since we are living in a world
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filled with rapid changes, we need to have brand new ways to think and cooperate. In an environment
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dynamic and constantly evolving, past experience is
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less reliable in teaching younger
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about the truths of life.
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,
teenagers
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would benefit more if they learn to
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challenge
the older ways of thinking and
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create their own understanding of the world. Because it is more likely that the old solutions become restrictions rather than
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the liberation
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of thoughts. After all, society improves as old rules
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, and outdated dogmas get challenged by younger
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. In conclusion. I would agree
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both views.
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,
teenagers
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can learn a great deal from examples led by
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older
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.
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, younger
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should be encouraged to challenge the old customs and rules.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Role models
  • Respect for tradition
  • Wisdom
  • Societal stability
  • Continuity
  • Critical thinking
  • Innovation
  • Societal progress
  • Adaptability
  • Questioning authority
  • Seeking identity
  • Generational gap
  • Value systems
  • Adherence
  • Challenging norms
  • Cultural evolution
  • Empathy
  • Guidance
  • Rebellion
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