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When you learn a foreign langualge ,all four skills (listening reading speaking and writing) ,are equally important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#langualge #four #skills
Nowadays,
number
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 of
people
 who
learning
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 a foreign
language
 is increasing due to globalization. Some
people
 consider that all four skills
such
 as listening, reading, speaking and writing are equally important for learning a foreign
language
. I partially agree with
this
 statement, and the following examples will be provided in order to support my point of view. On the one hand,
people
 who
want
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join
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 the Universities
in
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abroad and will study any subjects in
foreign
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a foreign
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language
they
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should
to
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learn a foreign
language
 including all four skills at
academic
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an academic
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 level. Because
,
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 those
people
 need to understand books and papers which are written in
foreign
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a foreign
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language
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.
In addition
,
people
 who are studying
in
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abroad,
they
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should speak fluently and their speech must be advanced.
Moreover
, their
writting
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writing
 will be perfect because those
people
 will be written their
report
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 and research paper in
foreign
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a foreign
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language
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.
On the other hand
, it is not required
learning
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 a foreign
language
 containing all four skills for
the
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some
people
 who just want to travel around the world and
making
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a
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foreign friends. If they can express themselves in
foreign
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language
, it is sufficient for them. In conclusion, it is better that
people
 learn a foreign
language
 completely at
young
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a young
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 age. But whether or not learning a foreign
language
 at
advanced
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an advanced
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 level, it is depending on
people
's wish and
their
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aims.
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