Your local public library wants improvement to their services and facilities .In order to get ideas from the public , they have asked library users to send them suggestions in writing. Write a letter to the librarian.In your letter. . describe what you like about the library . say what you don't like . make suggestions for improvements

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in connection with the request that you have made to all users to send their suggestions to improve the services and facilities in the public
library
. I am a regular user of the public
library
and enjoy reading books visiting here because it provides a calm and relaxing environment for readers.
Moreover
, the sitting facility is wonderful and huge. It can easily accommodate more than 1000 users in one sitting.
However
, there are a few things which make the whole experience bitter.
For example
, the lighting is not great in some seats, especially in the corners.
In addition
, Sometimes books are misplaced and take time to find them. I would like to make some suggestions for improvements.
Firstly
, we can arrange more light in the corners so that it would not be difficult for readers to read.
Besides
, we can automate the
library
system so that when a user returns the book, we can put it back in the right place. I am looking forward to hearing from you and hoping that the above suggestions will contribute to the betterment of the
library
. Your's faithfully, Gurpreet Kaur
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