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Write a letter to a friend who worked at your previous company. You have moved to a new job in a new city. Describe your city Describe your job Describe the arrangements for him to visit you

#friend #company #job #city #arrangements #visit
Dear Sally , How’ve you been? I am really sentimental about our past time together in ABC Co.,Ltd . Literally , I’m glad to inform you that I am already been offered an HR coordinator position in Aden Co .,Ltd which is based in the Yangon region. As far as the city is concerned , the weather is not as hot as in Mandalay , and the roads are spick and span . Most places are occupied by high-rise buildings , and there are a lot of clubs and restaurants in the downtown area. In terms of my new position , being a coordinator , mainly I have to handle the disciplinary and grievance procedure which can rack my brain a lot in some circumstances. Sometimes , I find it challenging but it is really stimulating and rewarding.
Accordingly
 , I’m thrilled to invite you to visit me once you have a holiday break . Don’t worry about buying the bus ticket and accommodation which can be leaned on me .
Moreover
, I’ll take you to the all the rage night market
that is
 easy to reach . Looking forward to receiving your confirmed date. Keep in touch, Mee Mee
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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