Governments spend a lot of money on public celebrations such as national holidays and public festivals. Some people say that the government spends too much on this and that they should use this money on other useful things. Do you agree or disagree

It is often believed by many people that authorities use much amount of

money

on the celebrating national holidays and festivals whereas others opine that wherewithal ought to invest in the other necessary development

such

as economical growth and public

health

. I completely agree with

this

notion. My position is justified

further

with reasons and examples. To commence, the foremost argument to justify my stand is it helps to improve the economy of the

nation

. To elaborate on

this

, more

money

needs to be

investe

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invested

in the educational sectors; government should provide free higher education to the poor students, who are unable to afford the fees. If the people are well educated

then

they are likely to get better employment in future.

As a result

, they can earn

money

by themselves;

financial

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burden of the central authorities will

significantly

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reduced, which can contribute

into

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to

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stable

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economy of the

nation

. For an instance,

USA

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,

the

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developed

nation

, governing bodies reserved their

money

to develop the standard educational system across the country which made individuals capable enough to find a suitable job after graduation ergo, the unemployment rate is extremely low; the public

contribute

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to the economic growth of the

nation

.

Moreover

,

money

needs to spend on public

health

in lieu of

celebration

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the celebration

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of the festivals.

This

is because owing to the poor

health

care system many people are not able to get appropriate treatment. It is true that many diseases are spread by the poor hygiene of the hospitals.

Therefore

,

health

care departments need to use their funds for building more efficient hospitals with modern technology equipment.

This

will reduce the mortality rate among humans in society as the standard medical treatment should be given to the patients.

For example

, India, a developing country, established more community hospitals in each city in the

nation

to combat life-threatening diseases. In conclusion, notwithstanding investing in the celebration of the festivals other imperative parts sectors

such

as education and healthcare can not be overlooked.