To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population, a country should make use of edible insects as a food source. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but harvesting them will also negatively affect nature. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
Since
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population
populaton
keeps growing, countries are trying to supply the rising demand Correct article usage
the populaton
of
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for
food
. Some Use synonyms
people
think that governments should make good use of edible Use synonyms
insects
as a part of Use synonyms
Use synonyms
food
supply; Correct article usage
the food
however
, some Linking Words
people
believe that consuming Use synonyms
insects
can cause damage to our health and may affect Use synonyms
our
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apply
nature
.
There are several advantages of eating Use synonyms
insects
. Use synonyms
First
of all, many Linking Words
insects
have Use synonyms
large
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a large
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amount
of protein which can offer enough energy for human bodies and maintain our health. Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
Moreover
, Linking Words
insects
are smaller than other domestic animals Use synonyms
such
as chickens, pigs, and cows, which often emit Linking Words
large
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a large
Use synonyms
amount
of carbon dioxide. Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
Therefore
, if Linking Words
people
change Use synonyms
thier
diet from domestic animals to edible Correct your spelling
their
insects
, the Use synonyms
emition
of greenhouse gases will decrease in the future. Correct your spelling
emission
emotion
Last
but not least, in Linking Words
urban
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an urban
the urban
area
, some Fix the agreement mistake
areas
insects
may affect human activities. Use synonyms
For example
, many bees' needles can cause serious injury to Linking Words
human
or release Fix the agreement mistake
humans
poison
that can kill an adult. Under Add an article
a poison
this
circumstance, if Linking Words
people
eat those Use synonyms
insects
, they can earn Use synonyms
the
energy and decrease the number of those Correct article usage
apply
insects
at the same time.
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On the other hand
, there are many disadvantages Linking Words
of
consuming edible Change preposition
to
insects
. Use synonyms
To begin
with, some Linking Words
insects
are Use synonyms
poisoness
for Correct your spelling
poisonous
human
body; Add an article
the human
therefore
it is easy for Linking Words
people
to catch and eat before enough education Use synonyms
of
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about
this
kind of diet. Linking Words
In addition
, since Linking Words
insects
are almost the lowest Use synonyms
preys
in our Fix the agreement mistake
prey
nature
, it is possible that catching them without limiting the Use synonyms
amount
may cause Use synonyms
unreturnable
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an unreturnable
disaster
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disasters
of
our Change preposition
for
nature
. Use synonyms
Also
, if we started to feed these Linking Words
insects
in a large Use synonyms
amount
, once they have been abandoned by merchants or disgusted by Use synonyms
public
, they may affect Add an article
the public
local
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the local
Use synonyms
nature
Replace the word
natural
food
chain.
To sum up, Use synonyms
although
some Linking Words
people
prefer countries use edible Use synonyms
insects
to Use synonyms
substitue
scarce Correct your spelling
substitute
food
resources, I think it is preferable not to consume Use synonyms
insects
. For me, the merits of eating Use synonyms
insects
clearly Use synonyms
outweighs
the demerits.Change the verb form
outweigh
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