In some countries, it can be very difficult for people over the age of 50 to get good jobs, despite their experience. What do you think are the causes of this problem, and what measures could be taken to solve it?
Getting a well-paid position for
people
over 50 has been a cause of concern for some time. Although
these people
have extensive experience, employers often do not wish to hire them. This
seems to be clear that this
development has specific problems
, which need to be resolved in the nearest future. First
problem, which seems to me to be the most important one, is that too often highly skilled workers in their 50s and 60s suffer from discrimination because they have, as it is usually said, too much experience and Change the article
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knowledge
. Managers understand that these features have to be appreciated more by some benefits like bigger
salary or more Correct article usage
a bigger
attention
and are not ready for this
. Second
reason is that for old Add an article
The second
people
using innovative technologies during their work is not a rose garden. Lack of knowledge
in digital literacy can cause problems
in fulfilling some tasks in our digitalized world. These problems
can be solved easily if to pay a little more attention
to them and here are my suggestions what
is needed to be done. Change preposition
on what
First
of all, government
can implement some benefits for companies which are hiring Add an article
the government
people
aged over 50 like reducing tax or customs fees so that companies will be interested to have workers in their 50s or 60s. Secondly
, government
in cooperation with some universities or collegesAdd an article
the government
,
can offer elderly Remove the comma
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people
to take free courses in the sphere of technologies
. Fix the agreement mistake
technology
Therefore
people
aged over 50 will be interested in improving their knowledge
, universities and colleges will get more students and companies will not face a
problem of lacking digital literacy in Correct article usage
the
people
in their 50s or 60s. In conclusion, most of problems
concerning Add an article
the problems
high
unemployment level of Correct article usage
the high
people
over 50 can be resolved through applying
benefits from the government and resolving the problem of lacking Add the preposition
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of
digital literacy. Remove the preposition
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This
issue needs more attention
from the society thus
an
extensive experience and Correct article usage
the
knowledge
of this
group of people
will receive deserved attention
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