Some people decided to have children in their late age than in the past. Why? Do advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Modern society has seen a declined willingness of young
people
to have a baby. Distinguished from their parent and grandparent generation, they tend to postpone their plans for a kid. Use synonyms
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this
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people
more advantages than disadvantages. In Use synonyms
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first
analyse why the young population choose to have kids late nowadays and Linking Words
then
explain why the pros outweigh the cons.
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. On the one hand, many Fix the agreement mistake
age
people
claim that they are resistant to being pregnant and raising a kid is that they do not like kids, and they attribute Use synonyms
this
mindset to their childhood experiences Linking Words
such
as bullie and their parents' failed marriage. Linking Words
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people
who love kids but Use synonyms
blocked
by material factors like money and time. Add a missing verb
are blocked
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at
their 20s or 30s have Change preposition
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exceedingly
heavy financial Add an article
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burdens
,
and are unlikely to spend time Remove the comma
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to look
after a single baby, not to mention 2 or more. Change the verb form
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Therefore
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people
tend to have children late than before due to their personal experience or the burden.
Despite Use synonyms
of
the fact that having a baby late has become a new normal choice among the new generation, the merits surpass the demerits given that Remove the preposition
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the
contemporary society has changed. Correct article usage
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First
, the young Linking Words
people
gain more time Use synonyms
to
the career development since they don't need to spend many years accompanying an infant. Change preposition
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Second
, following their free mind and personal choice can make them feel less stressed and more peaceful. Admittedly, they may regret Linking Words
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the future or feel bothered by the social or peer pressure, they can have remedies Correct pronoun usage
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adopt
a kid.
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tend
to be in favour of Change the verb form
tends
the
late birth due to mental obstacles or practical issues. Correct article usage
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However
, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...