The planet's population is reaching unsustainable levels, and people are facing shortage of resources like water, food and fuel. To what consequences may overpopulation lead? In your opinion, what measures can be taken to fight overpopulation?

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grew up rapidly. Many governments face to

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problem about it in their countries. Increasing

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a really important and critical issue for them. Because they should provide basic and main

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they have to invest a lot in housing and creating

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issue exists not only in developed countries but

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in developing countries. In my point

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growth seriously should be

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by the

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of

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on our world and

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propose some solutions.

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, global warming and air pollution

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caused by

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population

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. Global warming and air pollution lead to

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environment .So they can affect to producing

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and many resources.

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and exhaust smoke make to production of acid rain which can pollute water and soil and

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to health.

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of a suitable house or job for people and especially adolescents

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the other main

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for the

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that the

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can control

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of

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population

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,

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families who want to have more children should be paid more tax than

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families

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just one child. In conclusion,

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is the right of all humans obviously, providing food, water and many facilities for living and protection of the environment are important and vital too.in my point view is the

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should encourage people to

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less

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children.