Computers are becoming an essential part of school lessons. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

Nowadays
technology
considers an important part of
kids
' classes
such
as laptops or desktops and there are many pons and cons to
use
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them.
This
essay will talk about the advantages and disadvantages and tackle my opinion.
To begin
with,
technology
has In dispensable
rolls
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roles
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in
children
's lives and helps them a lot in the education process and has many advantages.
For example
, the
computers
make the lessons more enjoyable and save the time of lessons,
also
save the effort because the
kids
do not need to carry abg to school, the teacher can use
a variety methods
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variety methods
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in the way of learning the
kids
.
As a result
more and more education organizations now used
computers
in classes.
moreover
,
technology
brings disadvantages to the
children
's lives.
For instance
, the
children
now spend huge time on
computers
playing games or chatting with their friends.
Furthermore
, the
technology
may dispense the teacher rolls and a lots of people will lose their jobs and that will affect them and the
kids
may take the classes
form
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the home and the face to face learning will be lost and I think that important part of education and form the personality of
kids
and the interaction with their friends will be lost.
consequently
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that will affect
chldren's
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children's
learning. In conclusion, I believe that
computers
play
Indispensable
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an Indispensable
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role in
children
's lives,
also
the
kids
who can decide how to use the
technology
in their studies or waste their time on the internet.
Additionally
, the disadvantages of
computers
are more than the advantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Edutainment
  • Multimedia resources
  • E-learning platforms
  • Digital literacy
  • Cyberbullying
  • Ergonomic hazards
  • Cognitive overload
  • Technological proficiency
  • Blended learning environments
  • Instructional technology
  • Adaptive software
  • Screen time management
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