The government's investment in arts, music and theater is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
There is a heated debate that the government should finance public
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services
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as schools, hospitals, transportation and other facilities.It is undeniable that citizens’ primary needs are the Linking Words
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, a report has shown that approximately 80% of individuals who are in the middle class are not able to afford facilities from private companies due to cost efficiency.Linking Words
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On the other hand
,entertainment production has a crucial role in traditional cultures.It has drawn tourists’ attention around the globe to visit the country.Linking Words
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,the businesses owned by citizens receive more profits.Linking Words
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, Thailand's well-known artists have produced music videos taken in the countryside, after that more foreign people travel to the same town which causes a rapid increase in accommodation businesses’ profit gains.
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services
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as schools, hospitals, transportation and other facilities are way more significant than entertainment as they are humans’ basic needs.Linking Words
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