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Some countries have introduced laws to limit working hours for employees. Why are these laws introduced? Do you think they are a positive or negative development?

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In some nations there are strict law has been imposed by the governments on minimum working hours of the employee in their jobs, to keep both physical and mental stress. As far as I'm concerned limiting working hours for staff's should be followed in all types of companies and I believe it will have a positive impact on their productivity, In
this
 essay, I will discuss both benefits and drawbacks at the said trend. On the positive side, working 8 hours a day will keep employees a good healthy life with a perfect work-life balance,
also
 they can spend their quality
time
 with their family and friends.
In addition
 to that, some manufacturing companies offer staff to take sick and paternity leaves to make sure their emotions and health are good.
for example
, working less
time
 in the office will result in a gain in productivity output.
As a result
, employees can be retained in the
company
 for all
time
.
On the other hand
, there are several downsides for the individual as well as the
company
 to staying back and working long span of
time
.
moreover
,
this
 can lead to making errors or losses to the
company
.
for instance
, working with heavy tools for a long
time
 without sleeping in an industry can be dangerous as well as hazardous to the employee a single spark can destroy the whole manufacturing unit.
Finally
, there can be legal actions taken against the
company
 for not following the rules and guidelines provided by the authorities. In my personal experience, I have seen people travelling by bus with full of sweats on their shirts and tiredness on their faces while returning home from their office. To conclude,
Although
 there are some drawbacks for employees working for a long duration the benefits outright the disadvantages.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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