Task1: The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.
The given pie charts illustrate the percentage of
students
in the UK at England university
, peoples Fix the agreement mistake
universities
were
able to talk Correct pronoun usage
who were
to
other Change preposition
in
languages
between 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, a student who spoke Spanish
only has the highest in two different years. Additionally
, students
have the same proportion in three different languages
in 2010.
Focusing on 2000, the proportion of British students
able to speak other languages
, and undergraduates
who spoke Spanish
only were the highest at one-third
in 2000. Moreover
, students
who spoke Spanish
had a higher than students
have no other languages
at 10%. Interestingly, undergraduates
who spoke French only and another language has the same percentage at 15%. In addition
, the German language only and two other languages
have students
spoke the same proportion at 10%.
Turning in 2010, undergraduates
who spoke Spanish
only have the highest at 35% in2010
. Correct your spelling
in 2010
Furthermore
, those who spoke German only had a higher than students
who spoke two other languages
at only 5%. However
, undergraduates
have the same percentage of students
who spoke Spanish
only, French only, and no other language at 10%. in 2010.Submitted by bphonporton on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, languages, spanish, undergraduates with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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