More and more countries are making university education completely free for their citizens. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
As the value of
university
education
has been acknowledged by a lot of countries, many people believe that the nations give university
students
living in their countries tuition
fees for free. I support
this
idea because it will give the public long-term positive benefits
To begin
with, the government supports students
with all the university
education
money
and provides students
with the opportunity to gain many useful experiences
because students
do not need to spend time earning their tuition
money
. It is commonly known that some students
earn their own money
since they need to pay a high fee for their university
tuition
, so they have less time to experience a variety of experiences
during going to university
. For example
, unemployed students
have more time than working students
to travel overseas, so during vacations, they can travel overseas and experience various cultures by meeting people living abroad. This
shows that students
can broaden their thoughts which can be useful in the future by attaining different cultures. Therefore
, it is clear that the government should support
university
students
who live in their countries with all tuition
money
because it allows students
receive the chance to gain useful experiences
.
In spite of the above view, it is harmful to support
university
education
for free. because students
in college can poor grades easier than when they earn their own money
to pay tuition
fees. For example
, many students
learn the value of money
and learn to become more responsible by working while attending school. if they receive the financial support
of university
education
, they are more likely not to execute scheduled tasks in accordance with fixed deadlines and get bad performances since they are at university
without any charge. Therefore
, it is evident that offering free university
education
to the public will lead to becoming to have irresponsible behaviours.
In conclusion, it is clear that the government should give university
students
free university
education
fees because it will help students
gain useful experiences
in life and get higher grades than before.Submitted by thgus6883 on
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