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changes in the ownership rate of household appliances and used time spend on household housework from 1920 to 2019. Overall, as higher frequently electrical appliances were used, less used time was spent on housework each week. In 1920,
refrigerators
were used by below 4 per
cent
. In 40 years, the figure skyrocketed from 4 per
cent
to 90 per
cent
and raised slightly to 100 per
cent
. Until 2019, the rate of freezers which was applied to households kept remained and overlapped with freezers between 2000 with 2019.
Refrigerators
were the most proportion among 3 household
machines
. Washing
machines
at
first
were 40 per
cent
which 10 higher than vacuum cleaner at the same time. The figure raised to 70 per
cent
in 1960 and there was a crossing in at same year with
refrigerators
. Afterwards, the rate of washing
machines
was overtaken by
refrigerators
. Washing
machines
fell to around 65 per
cent
and increased steadily to approximately 75 per  
cent
.Vacuum cleaners started in 1920 with 30 per
cent
and were increased steadily to 100 per
cent
in 2000 and
then
kept same with 100 per
cent
in the
next
9 years.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • burning of fossil fuels
  • greenhouse gases
  • trap heat
  • atmosphere
  • deforestation
  • carbon dioxide
  • greenhouse effect
  • industrial activities
  • agricultural practices
  • carbon emissions
  • renewable energy
  • environmental regulations
  • energy efficiency
  • carbon footprint
  • lifestyle changes
  • public transportation
  • recycling
  • conserving energy
  • LED bulbs
  • plant-based diet
  • raising awareness
  • sustainable practices
  • international cooperation
  • Paris Agreement
  • mitigate
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