Food travels thousands of miles from producers to consumers. Some people think that it would be better for the environment and economy if people only ate the local food produced by farmers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In today's fast-paced world, transportation has been helping many goods including
food
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to move from one place to another. Among people are some who opine that nations should not consume
food
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-related
products
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from other countries and that they should consume
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that
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in the locality. As it could be beneficial to their
environment
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and to their
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alike. In my opinion, I completely agree with
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notion for two reasons that I will
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discuss.
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, moving
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that are meant to be eaten, many miles causes excessive pollution to the
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.
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is due to the fact that
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process requires a tremendous amount of fuel which is essential to the internal combustion of engines of the machine that haul
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.
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, most producers rely on ships and heavy trucks to move their goods thousands of miles, which are known for their high appetite
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fuel. In fact, burning fuel releases harmful gases including carbon dioxide, which is the main factor that contributes to global warming.
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, more air pollution is expected and could lead to irreparable damage to our atmosphere. For
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reason, I believe that environmental problems are inevitable.
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, consuming
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that had been produced in the locality could flourish the local
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drastically. Owing to the fact that authorities would spend less money on importing
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-related goods.
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money could be invested somewhere else.
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, it could be devoted to financing local farmers to encourage them to plant more
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that are in demand in local markets.
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, more job opportunities could be created for citizens.
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, standards of living could be increased for many. In conclusion, it is commonly asserted that citizens should consume
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products
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that have been produced in the locality in order to benefit their
economy
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and their
environment
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. I completely agree with
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view as moving
food
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products
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causes excessive pollution to the
environment
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,
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, consuming local
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could flourish the local
economy
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmentally friendly
  • carbon emissions
  • long-distance transportation
  • biodiversity
  • pesticides
  • fertilizers
  • local economy
  • sustainability
  • feasible
  • diverse range
  • food choices
  • cultural identity
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