Some people believe that university students should pay all the costs of studies because university education only benefits students themselves, not society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the high tuition rate
of
graduate qualifications, most governments, foundations and even rich individuals have come up with schemes to cover some or all of the cost. Certain people, Change preposition
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benefits only those who go for it. I completely disagree with Use synonyms
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notion, graduates are advantageous to society as a whole, and scholars contribute immensely to the advancement of the Linking Words
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, even so, we simply cannot live well without them.
The main reason I believe impecunious students should be assisted is graduates' substantial contribution to the Use synonyms
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for instance
, a layman could have never come up with the idea of an aeroplane, the process of refining petrol or the internet, to name a few. They have been and can only be achieved by trained professionals. Linking Words
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education
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graduates indeed were beneficial only to themselves.
In conclusion, despite the claim that students should not be helped regarding school fees, because of failure to see the numerous benefits they bring to the Use synonyms
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