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In the future all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles would be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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In the coming years, transportation like buses and trucks will be driven without drivers. So that
passengers
 can be travelled with
driverless
 vehicles. In
this
 essay, I will provide both
advantages
 and disadvantages and I argue the fact that the
advantages
 of
driverless
 vehicles outweigh the disadvantage.
However
, technology improves day by day. Humans are still needed for some work.
First
 of all,
passengers
 will be felt not safety with a robotic
car
 since they are used to travelling in a
car
 which is driven by a
driver
.
Also
,
this
 kind of
car
 can have more accidents because judgment and being careful are
also
 needed in driving skills.
Secondly
, the crime like many
passengers
 things being stolen is common these days.
For example
, if one of the
passengers
' purses is stolen by a thief, that passenger can inform the
driver
 and he will go straight to the police station to take action. But
if
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it
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 is a
driverless
car
, it will not happen like that.
Finally
, the things on the trucks can be stolen
hence
, most of the trucks have to travel during the night.
On the other hand
, there are some
advantages
 of
driverless
 cars.
For instance
, people who can not drive can travel without worries.
Moreover
 ,they can save money as they do not need to hire a
driver
. Another thing is that
passengers
 can save time because a
driverless
car
 will not do mistakes like a
driver
such
 as driving the wrong way. In conclusion,
although
 there are some
advantages
 to using the
driverless
car
 , it can never be replaced by the traditional vehicles for some reasons like safety.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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