These days, too many people maintain their health by relying on doctors and medicine, rather than by following a healthy lifestyle. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many

people

prefer to put the responsibility of taking care of their

health

on physicians' shoulders rather than revising their lifestyles.

Although

it is needless to say that

medicine

plays an increasingly important role in maintaining public

health

and human reliance on it is increasing , I am convinced that the younger

generation

considers having a healthy

lifestyle

far more vital to keep their

health

. There are several arguments that show

people

are far more dependent on

medicine

compared to the past.

First

of all, studies have shown that

people

's medication compliance has significantly increased. One can take the example of diabetic patients who accept the hassle of adjusting Insulin dosage by regularly checking their blood sugar, but avoid having regular physical exercise and decreasing their carb and

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intake.

Moreover

, it has been clearly observed that more patients are visiting

doctors

in a day. The logic behind

that is

the increase of diseases' prevalence as the result of ignoring a healthy

lifestyle

, which is the prevention of many ailments.

For example

in Vancouver, individuals need to wait for at least three days to see their family

doctors

.

Thus

, one should say here that sticking to unhealthy lifestyles is pushing humans to their

doctors

and

medicine

more. Having said that, recently the younger

generation

is taking a fresh look at

the

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healthy

lifestyle

as a passport to a healthy life.

This

is because they are exploring online resources and are far more aware of the importance of doing exercise and following

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diet.

For instance

, recently there is a craze

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being

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vegetarian

and most of them have chosen

this

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positive effects of it on their

health

. Apart from that, they are reading about the side effects of medications and try not to see their physicians unless everything they do fails

instead

prefer to diagnose and treat themselves.

Consequently

,

people

can say that the younger

generation

pays more attention to their

lifestyle

and resist

against

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medicine

. To sum up,

although

there are

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evidence that proves the dependence of human on modern

medicine

, there are still many

people

who do not trust

doctors

and try to take care of their conditions themselves. I would say that it depends on individuals and it especially is not true about the young

generation

.