Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

In today's modernized era,

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education plays

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substantial role in training

children

. It is argued by some folks that teachers do not have to give

children

homework

in the schools, while others believe it plays

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role in educating them.

However

, I would like to shed light on my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs. On the one hand, it has been said that instructors ought to avoid giving home practices to the

children

. One justification often given for pupils

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not to do practices at home is that they are in the

sensetive

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period of their life,

thus

they need more time for playing and enjoying their life except

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the time they spend at

school

.

That is

to say, when they are at

school

they are focused on their courses with accomplishing their exercises only in there in order to pass them with a high grade. Take Iran's educational system as the most patently obvious example,

children

have an obligation to carry out their work in the

school

so nothing will remain

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their house.

On the other hand

, some others think it is necessary for

children

to

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receive

homework

so as to be engaged with the studies they learnt in

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school

.

In other words

, repetition in the exercises

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pivotal role that may pave the path for coming successes in educational trend. More specifically, it not only is a desirable way for

children

who tend to achieve their goals but

also

it to be bound to result in flourished society.

Hence

, doing

homework

in the

school

places can bring both remarkable accomplishment and happiness for

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and society respectively. In conclusion, there are

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controversial

arguement

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argument

in the term of

homework

whether it is important to be done or not.

Nonetheless

, teachers and authorities have responsibility for conducting

such

a trend.