Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

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t is often argued that
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crowded and
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issue is to raise the
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of
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and
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. I completely disagree because that will affect the
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in many ways.
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, increasing the price of petrol will affect the
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in many ways. To explain, that. The salaries are not high and the life is getting tougher so the individuals can't afford
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a lot of money to buy
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and
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,
also
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the rise in
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would affect the economy in negative ways,
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as the
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will boycott camping of petrol and no one will buy the
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or
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and that will affect the economy.
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, in rising
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of
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and
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have
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a positive
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.
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, there are several solutions to
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traffic and
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issue.
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car sharing
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and
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apply
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that
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more than five
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can ride
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if they are going to the same place.
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, the government can give some bonuses for
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people
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how
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can convert their
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to
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car
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and there are a lot of cars that work on electric power rather than
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.
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.
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solution will help to decrease
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and the traffic. In conclusion,
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in
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cost
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the cost
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of
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and
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is not the best way to solve the
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crowded and
pollution
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issue because that will affect the
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and at
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the same
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time the
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will stop buying petrol.
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, there are many solutions,
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as
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car sharing
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and
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apply
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people
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start to consider covert their
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car
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cars
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to electricity.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Discourage
  • Incentivize
  • Alternative energy
  • Public transportation
  • Lower-income
  • Carpool
  • Ride-sharing
  • Congestion
  • Urban planning
  • Pedestrian-friendly
  • Tax incentives
  • Electric and hybrid vehicles
  • Emissions standards
  • Cleaner vehicles
  • Congestion charges
  • Bicycle lanes
  • Sustainable
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