Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?
t is often argued that
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way to solve Correct article usage
a great
car
crowded and Correct article usage
the car
pollution
issue is to raise the cost
of oil
and gas
. I completely disagree because that will affect the people
in many ways.
To begin
, increasing the price of petrol will affect the people
in many ways. To explain, that. The salaries are not high and the life is getting tougher so the individuals can't afford spending
a lot of money to buy Change the verb form
to spend
gas
and oil
, also
the rise in cost
would affect the economy in negative ways, such
as the people
will boycott camping of petrol and no one will buy the gas
or oil
and that will affect the economy. As a result
, in rising cost
of gas
and oil
have negative
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a negative
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effect
affect
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effect
then
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than
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a positive
positive
.
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Moreover
, there are several solutions to car
traffic and pollution
issue. For instance
, car sharing
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car-sharing
and
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apply
that
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apply
mean
more than five Correct subject-verb agreement
means
people
can ride one
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in one
car
if they are going to the same place. Furthermore
, the government can give some bonuses for be
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people
how
can convert their Correct word choice
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car
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cars
electricity
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electric
car
and there are a lot of cars that work on electric power rather than oil
. Consequently
. This
solution will help to decrease pollution
and the traffic.
In conclusion, rise
in Correct article usage
the rise
cost
of Add an article
the cost
gas
and oil
is not the best way to solve the car
crowded and pollution
issue because that will affect the people
and at same
time the Add an article
the same
people
will stop buying petrol. Additionally
, there are many solutions, such
as car sharing
and Add a hyphen
car-sharing
the
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apply
people
start to consider covert their car
to electricity.Fix the agreement mistake
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