Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

t is often argued that a great way to solve the

car

crowded and

pollution

issue is to raise the

cost

of

oil

and

gas

. I completely disagree because that will affect the

people

in many ways.

To begin

, increasing the price of petrol will affect the

people

in many ways. To explain, that. The salaries are not high and the life is getting tougher so the individuals can't afford to spend a lot of money to buy

gas

and

oil

,

also

the rise in

cost

would affect the economy in negative ways,

such

as the

people

will boycott camping of petrol and no one will buy the

gas

or

oil

and that will affect the economy.

As a result

, in rising

cost

of

gas

and

oil

have a

negative

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effect than

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one positive

.

Moreover

, there are several solutions to

car

traffic and

pollution

issue.

For instance

,

car

-sharing means more than five

people

can ride in one

car

if they are going to the same place.

Furthermore

, the government can give some bonuses

for

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people

who can convert their cars to electric

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and there are a lot of cars that work on electric power rather than

oil

.

Consequently

.

This

solution will help to decrease

pollution

and the traffic. In conclusion, the rise in the

cost

of

gas

and

oil

is not the best way to solve the

car

crowded and

pollution

issue because that will affect the

people

and at the same time the

people

will stop buying petrol.

Additionally

, there are many solutions,

such

as

car

-sharing and

people

start to consider covert their cars to electricity.