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Some believe that people should make efforts to fight climate change while others think it is better to learn to live with it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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I disagree with people’s opinion that we need to find a way to live with
climate
change
 than prevent it. Even though people may think that
change
 is inevitable, in my opinion, I think it is better to find ways to prevent the
change
 than live with it. In
this
 essay, I will share my knowledge on how and why we can. Prevention is better than cure. As the good old saying goes, we would be better off preventing
climate
change
 than trying to find a way to live with it. Living with the changes can impact our lives more negatively. We would
also
 be able to use lesser resources to prevent a problem than to remedy it.
For example
, in the case of global warming, our governments could take a stronger step by imposing a ban or higher taxes on older gasoline vehicles and promoting electrical vehicles, bicycles or public transportation as an alternative option for their citizens. Save for our future
generations
. Another important reason to prevent
climate
change
 is so that
generations
 who come after us, get to enjoy the
climate
 as we have seen and experienced it versus being forced to live with the changing world. It is our responsibility as humans to conserve, protect and prevent the changes.
For example
, when I was a kid, I could easily look up at the sky and gaze at the stars in the sky without the need for a telescope. Nowadays, it is very difficult to find starts with just naked eyes. If
this
 persists, our future
generations
 may never even know that starts to exist as they never are able to see it themselves. Summarizing
this
 essay, we would work to prevent a
change
 than live with it. Prevention will not only prevent the spread of
change
 but at the same time will help us to leave behind a better future for the
generations
 who come after us.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • climate change
  • mitigate
  • renewable energy
  • afforestation
  • sustainable practices
  • extreme weather events
  • carbon emissions
  • infrastructure
  • agricultural practices
  • moral responsibility
  • ecosystems
  • green jobs
  • economic growth
  • job losses
  • poverty alleviation
  • quality of life
  • proactive measures
  • balanced approach
  • green technology
  • unavoidable impacts
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