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Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. Others believe that it is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In the modern world, caring about the traditional cultures of countries is a well-discussed topic. Some individuals think that keeping alive conventional cultures is still imperative. on the other side, opponents have thought it does not mean these days. Based on some
citizen's
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 beliefs,
Although
, maintaining conventional cultures is so difficult job,
but
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it is very critical due to two facts.
Firstly
,
people
 think
established
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the established
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culture
 of a region is their link with
past
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the past
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 and if they forgot that, they would
lost
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 their own.
For example
, in Iran
costumes
such
 as
Nowruz
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the Nowruz
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 holiday, is one of the most imperative
event
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 for
Iranian
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the Iranian
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people
.
Consequently
, Iranian individuals try their best to keep alive their traditional region
although
, they live
in
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everywhere. The other fact would be
prejudiced
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.
It is
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last
 but not least.
The most
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 citizens all around the world have
prejudiced
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on
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against
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 their classical
culture
 and
costumes
.
The
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 example can be seen as African
people
, they have weird
costumes
 and some of them are cow worshipers and have
prejudice
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 against that.
In addition
, they transfer their region to the
next
 generations in Africa. In against side, opponents think in recent decades
people
 have
not
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 motivation to continue established
culture
.
Moreover
, citizens do not care about their traditions and just focus on the future because they are less close with each other so, they do not speak and transfer their past.
In addition
 for new ,generations conventional
culture
 does not have any means. They would like new
costumes
,
for example
, Iranian individuals prefer to wear the latest model of clothes and think traditional clothes are old-fashioned. In conclusion, in my view, it is really imperative and vital to maintain established
culture
 because without the past we lost our own.
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