Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. Others believe that it is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In the modern world, caring about the traditional cultures of countries is a well-discussed topic. Some individuals think that keeping alive conventional cultures is still imperative. on the other side, opponents have thought it does not mean these days. Based on some

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, maintaining conventional cultures is so difficult job,

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it is very critical due to two facts.

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think

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of a region is their link with

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their own.

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, in Iran

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holiday, is one of the most imperative

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, Iranian individuals try their best to keep alive their traditional region

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everywhere. The other fact would be

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but not least.

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citizens all around the world have

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their classical

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example can be seen as African

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, they have weird

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and some of them are cow worshipers and have

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against that.

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, they transfer their region to the

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generations in Africa. In against side, opponents think in recent decades

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motivation to continue established

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, citizens do not care about their traditions and just focus on the future because they are less close with each other so, they do not speak and transfer their past.

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for new ,generations conventional

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does not have any means. They would like new

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, Iranian individuals prefer to wear the latest model of clothes and think traditional clothes are old-fashioned. In conclusion, in my view, it is really imperative and vital to maintain established

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because without the past we lost our own.

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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288 words

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