Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Education for

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we should teach a child to strengthen personality and skills for the mature stage in

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. People have different points of

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that

children

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should be more competitive or

co-operative

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. While a motivation of competition can build good preparation for adult

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, I do believe that working in a group is more important. On the one hand,

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, competition can be considered as a way to raise

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the motivation

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children

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. In some high schools or even primary schools, the compulsory requirement of upgrading academic level in high-quality classes is the highest mark and excellent evaluation on

final

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test each year with a competitive rate equivalent to 5%. Competing to be the best inspires high-flyers to acquire better and unique methods for achieving and conquering new

record

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records

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.

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, a sense of competition improves the ability to think independently to come over

hardship

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or troubles faced in real

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.

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, some stressful tests will lead

children

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to depressing

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when they cannot achieve a better result with high

expectation

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.

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, some people assert that it is better for

children

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to develop themselves, by the way, to cooperate with others. When they work in a group, knowledge will be shared and lots of innovative ideas will come will

be come

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up with.

Children

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can learn from each other to strengthen strong points and address

weakness

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points

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. In reality, adult

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requires the skills of communication and

ability

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to create a network which regards as the basic foundation for social development. Collaborating with teammates

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sharpens management skills and raises responsibility for working and living in the community. In conclusion, for

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preparation for adult

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, the more cooperative

children

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are, the better they advance themselves.