Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter: • suggest how you could help her in her home • say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available

Dear
Mrs.
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Barret,
This
letter is in response to the advertisement you posted in The Times of India newspaper. I am Sudha
Tanvar
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Tanvir
and I live in the same town merely a few blocks ahead. And I'd like to tell you that I have got a keen interest in doing household chores. In my home town, I used to help my mother with all the daily work whether it is cleaning or washing dishes. As you have an infant, I could
also
go babysitting as I love to spend time with them. Apart from
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I'm pursuing an English Hons course from Delhi University. During my summer vacations, I want to utilize my time by earning some money which I can use as tuition fees and working with you will get me some financial help. I am available from 12 to 5 on weekdays and 9 to 5 on weekends. You can contact me for any
further
details, looking for a favourable reply. Yours sincerely, Sudha
Tanvar
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Tanvir
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Domestic chores
  • Culinary skills
  • Horticulture
  • Cultural immersion
  • Work ethic
  • Flexible schedule
  • Time management
  • Prior commitments
  • Punctuality
  • Reliability
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