An annual event was recently held in your area. Now you want to write to the organizers of this event congratulating them on a successful production. Write a letter to the organizers. In your letter, give - • the details of the event • what you most liked about the event • a polite criticism of something you thought could be improved You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear sir/ madam My name is Sulochana. I am a member Kalibari community. I am writing

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letter to congratulate you on the successful organization of the Bengali new year which is held recently in our community. I am pretty sure that other members of our community would

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feel the same way. Anyway,

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festival takes place in our area every year, but

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probably is the

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time in its history that you managed to attract so many people, not only from our own city but

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from many other communities.

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, you made all arrangements flawlessly including the sitting arrangements and music system which was clear and audible to every single person.

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, coming to the meal, the most sophisticated part of the occasion, you handled it perfectly.

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, We were a little concerned about the lighting system it could have been better if you had someone to check it while the program went on. Overall, the event went extremely well. Once again many congratulations for conducting

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a great occasion at our venue. We look forward to selecting you as our even organiser once again. Yours faithfully, Sulochana.

Submitted by Sulochana.kante on Mon May 02 2022

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Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

195 words

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