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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with that statement?

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Due to the rapid increment of
technology
 innovation, the traditional way of
news
 spreading is superseded by online articles and in the coming years, there will not be seen a single person reading papers. While I agree that
this
 trend will proceed alongside
technology
 improvement, there will be those who still choose to read
news
 or
information
 in the newspapers or printed materials. On the one hand, a sheer number of
people
 are spending a considerable amount of time on media platforms to explore the knowledge in which they are interested. Since
technology
 is invading globally and instructors are openly lightning to their apprenticeship the way how to dig and unearth the deep amount of intricate
information
 by using digital platforms, youngsters and even middle-aged communities who can access the internet and have the ability to be familiar with various methods of the way to discover their interest ones choose, in present, to read on online.
Moreover
, because it gives real-time
information
 about what is happening in the world and provides to share globalized readers’ opinions at no cost, digitized reading is becoming increasingly popular and already fading away books or papers.
However
, there will be some
people
 who would still prefer to read newspapers and buy books no matter how much
technology
 brings convenience to life.
People
 living in villages which limited internet speed or no connection at all and older ones who did not have any capability to go online are obviously purchasing books or newspapers whenever they desire to
further
 explore the
information
 they need and get real-time updated
news
. Even though the younger generation surfs the net every day and reads their favourite on a computer or tablet, they would still be reading
news
 or academic context by holding a paper to the future, as most
people
 love a smell from page-turning. In conclusion, it is true that
people
's reading habits will change to paperless in the future but I believe that there will be ones who love the traditional reading style and keep it along with reading online.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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