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The digrams belowgive information about the eiffel tower in paris an outlinect project to extend it underground Summarise the information

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The maps provide information about the tower of Eiffel which is located near the Seine river in Paris and
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 a layout to develop
to develop
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it
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underground. Overall, it is clear that
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 wonderful structure can facilitate
the
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access to some amenities like parking and entertainment equipment. Beginning with the breathtaking metal structure which is 324 meters and 101000 tones weight.as well as
it
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has 1665 steps between the two viewing platforms for visitors. The
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 platform has a height of 115meters from
ground
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 which is 58 meters taller than the
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 platform. Turning to the plan of expansion of Eiffel tower’s underground, the
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level
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 is planned
to
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ticket
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 office and access to
tower
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.
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, the
second
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level
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 is provided
the
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 location of shops and restaurants for tourists. Cinema and museum are located
in
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 the
third
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level
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 and parking are situated
in
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 the fifth and fourth
level
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 in order to facilitate the access to parking.
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