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Universities should allocate the same amount of money to student's sports activities as they allocate to their libraries. Do you agree?

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Sports
 play a very integral and vital role in human lives
this
 day as people are becoming more
health conscious
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 and fitness freaks.It is argued that the educational institutions must equally spend the money on physical exercises as they do for libraries.I do agree with
this
 statement to some extent and the following essay will discuss the reasons behind
this
. To commence with, organizing
the
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sports
 events can encourage students to indulge themselves in physical activities along with their academic courses.For an instance, In
India
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,India
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 90% of the parents deprive their children of playing
sports
 because they want them to do better in their studies.They think that
sports
 are just a wastage of time and their kid's
live
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 can be ruined if they are into
such
 activities. So, if the schools take the
inititative
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initiative
 in arranging
such
 things
then
 parents will not be able to question the school and it will give students the chance to choose the sport of their own choice.
On the other hand
, spending too
many
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 funds on
sports
 can sometimes even disturb the environment.
For example
, if the event is for one week
then
 for that week students will only be concerned about their performance and they will not take their courses into consideration and they will form a pile-up of work to do
thus
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this
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 ending up with
a
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low scores by the end of the year. Overall, since merits outweigh the demerits the universities must try to use their grants for
sports
.
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